Last week Team 4 went to see the River Talks demonstration at Omaru creek. Check out our video we made for PENN.
Also have a look at this introduction for a recount that Rima wrote:
Swimming, playing and dancing at the creek. Back in the day people were having a lot of fun at Omaru creek, yup I'm talking about that place that is now full of rubbish! What can you do to help clean the creek?
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What a fabulous movie Room 6. I was so sorry not to get to the River Talks myself and now I feel like I have a good idea of what a great event it was. I love the different ways they shared the story with you all. Rima, your super introduction had me hooked too.
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That look's like fun
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ReplyDeleteI like how you put were you went to.
I like how you put how we could keep the creek clean.
How did you feel when you saw all the rubish.
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ReplyDeleteI like the way you have post this.
I like it when you were going to clean up the creek.
I hope you get it done, Have you been cleaning it?
I want to say a vast thankyou to all the people that has left a good comment. But all I used to make a nice intro was a complex sentence, a simple sentence and a question. I would also like to thank mr godwin for telling me all about these sentences,
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ReplyDeleteI like how you put that you went to go help pick up rubbish.Also I like how you all listened to the people.
What do you think you could to help them.
Hi room 6 I'm monilate from Edmund Hillary School.That is really cool room 6 I hope you had a awesome time .
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Hi i'm from Edmund Hillary School and i just finished watching your video and i was just wondering what did you learn ?
ReplyDeleteHi I'm sauliloa from Edmund Hillary school.The video that you guys posted is amazing. Were you guys excited?
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